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The Collective Unconcious by ~dedxpoet:icondedxpoet:



addictive prescription, the risk is an intention
not to mention an invention to lessen the tension
demented dementions, dementia's relentless
lack of sleep attacks and I'm rendered defenseless
the end and the begining, i've sinned and i'm sinning
days i've spent swimming in living and grinning
wishes of lipstick and licked lips flicker and twitch
the itch makes me sick, (heartbeat) the quicker it gets
summer takes a shift, cool air shakes the senses
i'm senseless, menaced by memories of friendship
onslaught of distraught thoughts that i'd rather not thought
think i thought not thoughts of distraught onslaughts
an incision of intuition in a vision of vivid derision
livid from the collision and living with the decisions
dreaming in plastic, elastic tactics, seemingly magic
magically dreaming maddness, gleaming plastic attraction
denim sky nights, women spit venom and night skies hide
venom fried minds, women in denim with night sky eyes
finger tip ink stain, stands out like pink paint
i can't think straight, now it's wednesday
and all my friends say that my end's frayed
i tell them i'm knot, i just haven't slept in ages
but i've wet the pages in an attempt forget the rages
lyrical lunacy lingers on loose leaf
leaves linger loosely on lyrical lunacy
the truth is excuses use the truth to excuse the proof
the excuse is truth uses excuses prove the proof
evident evidense eventually elevates to the state
or residence sequentially by debate or relevance
reflective complexity has got the best of me
laboratory tested, injected, and rejected me
even subtle thoughts bubble with trouble
trouble bubbling doubles, subtle turns to rubble
eye shadow sunset, having fun yet? it's not done yet
epic episodes explode and overflow into oceans
divided sides in motion, that's the flow of potions
red-light district mixed with vicious lipstick
take the script and flip it, vicious red-light lips lick
don't start a fight, find a lighter start a fire
wear your best attire and dance within the lights
©2003-2009 ~dedxpoet
:icondedxpoet:

Author's Comments

The next entry is quite long and doesn't make very much sense. It is a collection of unconcious thoughts and phrases from the background of my everyday life. Some of you may say that it's just words and rhymes and that it is a lesser of my works, but I see it as something that can only be understood by forgetting reality and letting your mind expand to a place with limitless possiblities...the unconcious that frees us from the burdens of life. So please enjoy at your own liesure and feedback is much anticipated. Thank you~

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:iconohmyinsanity:
ok... dude, i just came home andimreallyhigh. and i decided to go on deviant art for i forgot the reason but right now the important thing is that im REALLY tripped out... like that was freakin trippy as oh my lord. wow man... very loquacious. BUT maybe im high but i think youre missing a couple " to"s. what am i saying... i am high.
~sheperd

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.::trying to fix or change something only guarantees and perpetuates its existence::.
:iconblueshine:
Damn man ...this beats Eminem's rhymes :) great work man ..flows with a really good beat ..

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my candle burns at both ends.
it will not last the night
but ah my foes and oh my friends
it gives a lovely light ...........................Roa ld Dahl
:iconobsidian-butterfly:
thats amazin, i have no idea how ppl write tht kinda thing, if u put that to music or at least a heavy baseline that just.......whoah. great rhymes
:iconwhisperinsanity:
wow thsi is insane ~i love it
its so random ly organized ~ just like thoughts are ~ a jumble of beautiful words in a random flow that works in a way so nicely~ amazing style i am really impressed i can never get my thoughts out as well as you have ~ simply brilliant
~ good work
~ jenn
:-)
:iconlostchicasso:
:worship: Its amazing! "lyrical lunacy lingers on loose leaf
leaves linger loosely on lyrical lunacy" < -- I love that bit I think this is brilliance at its best. I'm adding you to my deviwatch...I can't wait to see what else is in that noggin of yours!

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ilovehereventhoughshesnotanormalgirl
:icondamara:
o_o

*bows down*

Magnificent.

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Shit.
:icondemiane:
Awesome, original.
:iconmrmcpheezy:
I love the collective unconscious. I didn't read this because it was too long. Oh well.
:icondiscarded-youth:
Collective Unconcious? Tool reference? Well, either way Tool rocks. This rocks, too. Very rad. Would make a very interesting song, I believe.

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Coordinate brain to mouth then ask me what it's like to have myself so figured out...

...wish I knew...
:iconblinkybaby:
Awesome work! Great job! :nod: :D

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